Excerpting

I'm 41 pages into my script. (That makes only 59 more pages to go! Egads! How did I get so behind?) I finally typed in an edited excerpt onto my Script Frenzy profile. If you are interested (or bored and looking for a cheap laugh), here is the link.

I'm pleased with how it cleaned up. Maybe I'll take it and show the original versus the first edit. Not that I changed a lot. Mainly language and character direction. But it reads better now.