tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1504709018372694742.post9055755828142921182..comments2023-09-05T08:39:17.610-07:00Comments on Immaculate Novelists Kult: Taking AdvantageKamihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00531243633193697440noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1504709018372694742.post-30553298662579714002008-01-30T07:08:00.000-08:002008-01-30T07:08:00.000-08:00Oo, yeah, my comment sounded snarky. Sorry. I had ...Oo, yeah, my comment sounded snarky. Sorry. I had written in there that this was a great opening and I loved the descriptions about touching the hot stove, but I must have deleted it when I was tweaking the comment.<BR/><BR/>Anyway, yeah, ditto Carole. Definitely want to read this (and not just for a critique!) Having never read the original ms would make it all the more interesting, too! It'll be a brand new story that I've heard so much about over the years. <BR/><BR/>I'm really glad you worked on it during Nano.C. Jane Reidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00131009339900981548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1504709018372694742.post-66459498963086878322008-01-29T20:00:00.000-08:002008-01-29T20:00:00.000-08:00Quite honestly, I think this is the finest writing...Quite honestly, I think this is the finest writing I have read of yours to date, and I've read some great stuff.C.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03405230532317363372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1504709018372694742.post-46753756898466068422008-01-29T19:11:00.000-08:002008-01-29T19:11:00.000-08:00Congrats to entering!One of these days, you'll hav...Congrats to entering!<BR/><BR/>One of these days, you'll have to start giving us <I>Mayhem</I> to critique. So I won't do it here. Except to say that I think your opening line should be "I'm plenty tall for a woman, but I don't think I'm tall enough for a myth." That just jumped out at me.<BR/><BR/>And you aren't going to want to know what I think you should do about your opening to <I>Masks</I>. Actually, to everything before him sailing up to Perida, where the tone changed for us. <BR/><BR/>But I think you know what I'd say.C. Jane Reidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00131009339900981548noreply@blogger.com